"Do ya hear me?" - Care to comment?

Question: "Do ya hear me!?" - Care to comment!?

It's like!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

Silence!.

Followed by!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.a long pause!.

Quiet!.

Then suddenly!.!.!.!.!.!.!.nothing!.

Profound!.

Deafness is like that!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The dots add to the poem!. I just wish you wouldn't be so wordy! Hard to discern the message when excess words are present!

Edit: Kidding about the words, this was done well with a sparseness to the words!. Sorry if I confused you, it was meant as a joke for the sparse style you used!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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