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Question: Poem is this OK!?
Finish what we Started

I thought we would have something special
when I first kissed you it crept inside me
We have them and your not here I am alone while they sleep when they wake there 's only me
you 've been gone for quite a while they don't even know your smile I still hurt when I think of our plans
Sometimes It even makes me mad we are going to be fine
just thought I would drop a line
Just to remind me of old times
I had to say I am finshing what we startedWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's ok, but it is all tangled up!. Break it up into stanzas to make it flow better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com