My poem 'The Wrinkled Poem' please comment?

Question: My poem 'The Wrinkled Poem' please comment!?

What do you think!?

The Wrinkled Mirror

The mirror now old of time
and elderly look upon too long
so many gaze into a wrinkled sublime
their youth it creeps along!.

Its wooden frame now rotten
dust has settled like moss
in a house its long forgotten
past lookers their youth was lost!.

Life and youth it drew
from a paralyzed audience taken
in a wrinkled gaze they knew
of youth they were forsaken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I liked "The Wrinkled Poem" -- but when I read your notation I chuckled!.

I like this poem!. The essence of "Mirror, mirror on the wall" flows through it, and though the mirror is aging, the sense that those who gaze into are actually aging is very strong!.

Beautiful
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it depresses me - but the poem is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i thought it was a very powerful poem about age very good :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com