My poem please comment and read?

Question: My poem please comment and read!?

The Wrinkled Mirror

The mirror now old of time
and elderly look upon too long
so many gaze into a wrinkled sublime
their youth it creeps along!.

Its wooden frame now rotten
dust has settled like moss
in a house its long forgotten
past lookers their youth was lost!.

Life and youth it drew
from a paralyzed audience taken
in a wrinkled gaze they knew
of youth they were forsaken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Woww!.!.!.

Love the way you use your words
doesn't need changing or anything
perfect just the way it is!. Kind of reminds me of my style of poetry!. Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

What happened to the previous version which I already answered!?

The metaphor of the wrinkled mirror is excellent -- the reflection shows the loss of youth and the again of the wood on the mirror is symbolic for the aging of our bones and bodies!.

Good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not trying to "butter you up," but in all honesty this is excellent!. Continue writing poetry as this and then publish your works!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its good in my opinion but moss and lost dont really rhyme thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

thats kinda good you know!. i like it, it sounds meaningful and spooky lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com