What do you think about my poem???

Question: What do you think about my poem!?!?!?

'First Love'

First love,
Is someone I'll never forget,
Unchanged, she's the one who teach me how to fall in love,
Someone who's started my journey to feel the real world,
It's the first moment in my lifetime I can see how beautiful love is,
The memories I always remember,

She is my first love,
gives another chapter in my lifetime,

One moment I can't forget,
Whatever it was, good or bad,

She is still a part of my live!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

thats beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a beautiful sentiment of obviously a good first time sexual encounter!. I don't think it is exactly a poem!. But a personal feeling to express!. All the verb-age is heart felt but not in the poetry mode!.!.!.!.my opinion sorry!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

not very good!.!.!.!.!.sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Part of my live!?!?

Cliche cliche, with some spelling errors for good measure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com