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Question: Shall we write a poem together!?
I think we should write a poem together, I will provide the title and the first stanza, and I am looking for the next stanza only!. I'll pick based on both the one I like, and the one you guys say is the one you think I should pick!. The one chosen will be given the 10 Best Answer points!. I will then post another question with what has been added that far, and will then continue to elicit the third and fourth stanzas, and we'll aim to end it with the fifth and final stanza!. With enough effort, I'll bet we could really come up with something cool!. So offer a stanza, or if you like someone else's stanza, and want to respond to this question just to say that you think I should pick it, I'll count your vote as equal to my vote for one point, therefore you will have as much say as I do in determining the best stanza to add to the poem!. That way, we'll write it together, and when its all done we'll see what develops! also, suggest alternate titles if you like as it develops!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Aching to be found by you,
Crying for a cure!.
I'll scream until the path unfolds,
where it leads: Unsure!.


that took me all of thirty seconds!. just thought i'd give it a try! :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

First Stanza:

I, myself, am lost in Lost,
if such a land there be;
I'd wager if you're ever there,
you'd find my company!.

I myself need a beacon
a satnav in the sea of life
a lifetime's partner I am seeking
when I have divorced the wife!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

To find something that was lost before
to find it without the loss of her
to know whats there is not a lie
and to hear the truth inside this lie


i know it doesnt have like a pattern or ne thing im sorry its all i could think ofWww@QuestionHome@Com

I can hear the rain outside
These endless rooms of gray
Maybe I will hear your voice
And know you're close at bay!.

Well!.!.!. that was bad!.!.!. gimme a sec, I'll do better!.

Windows, doors: I cannot see
Trapped in Confusion's womb!.
I think I'll try this archway -
Darn, another round gray room!.

Ok, a little better!.!.!.

It's cold inside this dripping place
Trapped in Confusion's womb!.
I think I'll spin myself a coat
Upon Decision's loom!.

Alright, I give up!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com