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Question: Have I missed anything important!?!.!.!.No, wait, that's chit-chat!.!.!.Do you like this part of the story!?
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How many stories remembered, Cornplanter
How do we know when the legend is truth
“Look toward the sun, my young Sandal Walker
see that the rim has colors and hues!. There, in the
light that our eyes can take hold of, that is the place
where legends come true!.”
How can I see what my eyes are afraid of
How can I look past the mountains and seas
“Stand by the shore and greet the friend ocean
Breath in the brine from mist in the air
Hear the waves roll a steadier chorus
Free from the worrying lines of despair!.”
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Okay, now you have done it! This is the best chapter so far!. It sings!. It sang as I read it!. I want the rest of the story to be like this!. Can you please get serious and do it!! Stop with Wal*Mart and Saks Fifth Avenue already and do it right
For "breath," read "breathe!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
Tell us please does TD stand for To Do!? like the list!?
!.!.!.and how do we pronounce Euwaite!? You wait!?!.!. so !.!. I wait for you to do more!
The Legend of Cornplanter and Sandal Walker is as good as it gets!. I certainly do not want the tale to end!.
I find myself looking and waiting like a child at the mail box!. This is really the best part of my day!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Much the same as J!. K!. Rowling, you have created that which the populace would like to see propogated into epic proportions, maybe into novel length song!. We may have the next Longfellow with poems that span chapters, or maybe a new Robert Southey!. I await the next exciting episode!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not too shabby, this on-going saga of yours!.
Vee haff notized, howeffer, zat you almozt tchatted!. People are beginning to talk and vee alzo notized you are nott displaying your Happy Yamster pin on your lapel!. Ziss is tchust a vord to ze wise, vee trust you vill get zee point!. You haff been varned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I wondered when Brine would sneak in!.!.!.!
(He's not the messiah, he's a very naughty boy)!.!.!.(",)
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Ps!. All joking aside, momentarily, keep going with these!.!.!. they're really nice!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is one traveling Indian! Did he remember to breathe or take a breath!? I hope this tale does not travel to children of the corn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And Yes!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. The Journey Continues!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your poem calms me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com