How can I improve this dedication to Theodocious Dagmartin?

Question: How can I improve this dedication to Theodocious Dagmartin!?

For Theodocious Dagmartin
by Elaine P

I have lived
in past times
through the works
of the masters!.

I have seen
the future
through the thoughts
of the dreamers!.

I must live
in the present
though time warps
at my touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I am seizing the day right now!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I always lived by the phrase "Carpe Diem!." I can't change the past, I can't expect the future!.

Good poem!. I love the line "time warps at my touch!." I don't think you can improve it, it's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not my words! But you are reading my thoughts, and I do
believe thoughts travel on the waves!.
This says so very much in few words, heart touching, Bravo!
It is perfect to my way of thinking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You need to fire up the warp drive, dust off the ray gun and put those rose colored glasses on! I see a trip in your future since you warp time now with your touch! Good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very touching dedication to TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

It looks as though you may have found your own crack in time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I take your poem as positive, good advice !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com