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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this a good poem/lyrics?Question: Is this a good poem/lyrics!? Come as you are, as you were,
As I want you to be As a friend, as a friend, as an old enemy Take your time, hurry up The choice is yours, don't be late Take a rest as a friend as an old memory Come dowsed in mud, soaked in bleach As I want you to be As a trend, as a friend, as an old memory And I swear that I don't have a gun No I don't have a gunWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I didn't know Kurt Kobain was in the room!.Www@QuestionHome@Com absolutely fascinating!. lovely!. it was well written and obviously thought out!. just a suggestion, perhaps elaborate on it, make it longer!.!.!.and it you are trying for lyrics, add a chorus!. but its deff at a fine point where it is!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com Nirvana!. Come As You Are!. As their work, it's an amazing song!. As yours, it's poorly planned plagiarism!.Www@QuestionHome@Com All poems are good poems when they have meaning and are well written!. If your poem has meaning to you then others will appreciate it!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com YES, BUT I DIDNT GET THE PART ABOUT THE GUN AT TEH END!Www@QuestionHome@Com |