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Question: Is this Emo!?If it is, is it still good writing!?
-Angel Fangs
Caressing and kissing
the more secret places
A tear of joy shed for being
just being
nothing more
But something beyond
a secret shed
shared and bled
A Vampire to take my mind
risk in love
My dangerous side has been
awoken for the first time
To find one
to lend a hand
who allows my touch
without question
says I have saved her
When in all truth I have been saved
by the eyes of night and dark
a place among the ashes of
living dead has brought me back
from the grave
of emotional expenditure
of fallen grace
I have fallen again
into a life
new and unknown…
Where Vampires have come to play
I am going through some things in my life… who isn’t… but I always write about the things I am going through!. Does that make me Emo!? I would love to hear you thoughts on this as well…Www@QuestionHome@Com
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This is an emotionally charged poem-does that make it Emo!? I don't really care because it is a fine delight to read!. It is interesting that you say the Vampire has brought you back from the grave, it is a fascinating concept!. I realize you meant emotional death and not virtual death, of course, and that what has come to life is your "dangerous side"!. All wonderful images created in this poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Most poetry results from when people are going through rough times!.!.!. I guess everybody is emotional!. The term 'emo' has become a cultural term for people who wear dark clothing, eyeliner, a certain hairstyle, and feel sorry for themselves!. Your poem is decent, and not a horribly dreadful emo poem!.!.!. those really make me feel like killing myself!.
'I need an escape,
My tears come down
Like my blood
You destroyed me'
etc etc etc!.!.!. bleehh, you poem is alright though!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Emotional banter of the most poetic sort seems to be taken by most in this age as a trend to be looked down upon! Worry not, dear Knight, this is the show of a poet and a willing lover of darkness!.!. the sexy kind, of coarse!Www@QuestionHome@Com
well it is your poem is emo but it that does not mean that your emo because you dont always write sad emotional feelings all the time right!? Maybe poetry is a way for you to express yourself & your feelingsWww@QuestionHome@Com
This poem is good!. I don't think it's emo to write about what you feel, that's the inspiration for most poets, including myself!. Keep writing, your good at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
you know dud i have been reading your work
who cares if it is EMO or not it is good no great
getting in touch with the dark side of yourself
you know that's what i am all aboutWww@QuestionHome@Com
its alright
and it depends on wat you consider being emo!?
ppl call me emo all the timeWww@QuestionHome@Com