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Question: My second fantasy poem please comment too!?
City Worm

The city worm does turn and swell
in sewers of wet it does yet dwell
tunneling through it knew in haste
to belong in slime and grime and waste!.

Pass under the cities thunder to live
does dither but slither and give
a slimy but shiny covering of gel
in its home in movement alone it does smell!.

City lights in nights the worm does see
through gutters it mutters of thee
and chase the car noises to race and play
but a second worm it does yearn to stay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
!.!. nice, it's very creative!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! that is magnificent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked the last paragraph!.!.!.
First and second were meh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com