Is someone else dreaming?

Question: Is someone else dreaming!?

I dream

I dream of stars, floating in my eyes
of worlds, peaceful and calming
with comet trails…playing tag
and milky pots a stirring

I dream of oceans all shades of blue
with whales and dolphins leading
while riding white capped rollers
and chasing waves just for sport

I dream of but a single family
leaving no more redden dyes
or staining worlds here and there
claiming what is never theirs’

I dream shedding no more of my tears
for tears are holes filled with black
and blackness takes all it can
while leaving… a nothingness

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You may say, I'm a dreamer!.!.!.(bahm, bohm, bohm, bohm)
But I'm not the only one!.!.!.

Dude!
There's another fine mess you've got me into!

Seriously, for a moment!.!.!.
I love the "redden dyes" (or "reddened eyes") line!.!.!.
In it's entirety, the whole piece is great but that line just takes it to the next level!.!.!.
Nice one!.!.!.
D!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, You could have been writing this for me!.!.!. I am leaving next month for a year in the Marshall Island to teach!. Perhaps I will stay two years!.
Your poem is excruciatingly beautiful!. Poignant and profound it is !.!.!. especially the third verse!. Such courage! Neonman!. If you do not mind I will take this one with me !.!. print it on card stock and use it for my book mark !.

A date would be a good way to put it into perspective!. did you just write it or has it been around awhile!? Any way !.!. I love it! Thank you for sharing your dream !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is your single family the new Adam and Eve!.!.!.walking out of paradise and populating the world!? And in doing so bringing purity and peace with them this time!. What a wonderful dream!.

Wouldn't it be great just for a moment to jump back to pre-man (post dinosaurs) and see the world before pollution and evil took hold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

William Somebody-or-other wrote, "I could live in a nutshell and consider it the universe, if it were not for bad dreams!." Well, this is a good dream, in which you have looked at the universe and put it all into a nutshell!. That is not bad for an inert gas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This has both serenity and pathos in its images!. The dream is a beautiful one, painted with your lovely words!. Each stanza is a small wonder of thoughts you offer, including the bittersweet last lines!. I love this one!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dream with you of all these things, surely of stars and their peaceful worlds, of oceans clean and filled with life, of no more war and youth forever!. I dream with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This poem has amazing imagery!. I dream with you, also!. Will it ever become reality!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dream of dreams one filled with dreams
I dream of hope, not just being a dream

The Dream of a Dreamer - neonmanWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bravo! "To dream the impossibe dream"
"The bridge over troubled waters"
If not for dreams, some days--------------well we know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

First verse was AMAZING!.
It got weaker as it went along though!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dream is a powerful thing, some good and some bad but worth going there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey Neonman, I'm fueling the rocket dude! I'm going with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK!.!.!.!.!.!.truce!.!.!.!.!.!.minimalist comment!.!.!.!.I like!.Www@QuestionHome@Com