Tell me please is this really bad?

Question: Tell me please is this really bad!?

Evermore~ pat ramsden

the way you looked
you seemed to glow
with gentle light!.
upon a rippling shore
and I !?
was but a drop of rain
water falling into water
again, again
and forever more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It isn't bad - it isn't good!.

It is just a simple concept - you looked at some-one you love, and saw them in a new light - standing in a beautiful place!.
Whereas you are insignificant, just a tiny drop of water - although, you're love is everlasting!.

how about the following slight tinkering!?

the way you looked
you seemed to glow
with gentle light
upon a rippling shore -
and I!?
I was but a drop of rain
falling into the ocean
again, and
again
and ever more!.

(nice to see you back)Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice i like it a lot its not badWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't want to put you down, but I don't think is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com