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Question: A poem of a voyage, tell me what you think!?
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A Voyage
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.By Dag Drahmr
Life can be beautiful
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or a living hell!.
A vision of a rainbow,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.just one full of color
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.more would hide the value!.
A vision of darkness,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.filled with bad images
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.to cloud the mind with fear!.
A journey,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.a path through virgin woods,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.time to smell the flowers!.
A trek,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.the path is heavily trod,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.odors of death hides everything!.
Whichever one you are on
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.tis something to behold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is a journey through life!. All our senses and thoughts come into play!. I am quite aware of this voyage at this time of my life!. Life has alot to do with how you perceive it!. Thank you for this poem!. It has clarified my thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Its a nice start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
To me, ok, but not one of your best that I have seen you post!. Starting with a cliche is hard to overcome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Cool you really stuck to the topic!. It makes not wanna travel!.LOL!. I liked it great great jobWww@QuestionHome@Com