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Question: Do you like this peom !?
Special day

As I rode upon my bike
On this very special day
I heard a toot from behind
So I truned and looked that way
Mum and Dad were sitting there
A smile upon their face
I yelled out "NO"
"How can this be"
you died when I was three"
I dropped my bike upon the ground
And run to loving arms
But as the vision disappeared
I fell upon my knees
A single tear rolled down my cheek
and fall upon my heart
That's when I knew that I been blessed
And we would never be apart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
thats sweet, sad poem :(
if its real then thats a deep poem!.!.!.its good!.
But it could only mean that much to you so if other people dont like it that because they cant understand you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a nice, Poem i love it, maybe is because i to, write poems and quotes, and i see your point, of view, some times some people do not like or understand a poem because we are different, and as a writer, or as a poet!. we will face this kind of situation , and we cannot please every one, so don't be discourage!. Your poem is different , is from your heart, and it is truthful, it has a main idea, and your quoat, and quoatation, are beautiful!! Good job, keep it up!.!.!. Peace out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its sad, truthful but misleading, back to the memories, its okWww@QuestionHome@Com

It is a very nice poem!.But it gives the reader a picture of a short story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's touching!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unsettling, disturbing It is good but I dont "Like" it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com