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Question: Readers: How many stories are you in the middle of right now!?
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The fire crackles and embers
fly like mad demons from the
bon!. The huge logs surge
and snap as the blaze devours
everything thrown onto the pile!.

As the wind howls, children
stamp out the grass fires popping
to life from the flying sparks!.

Sandal Walker stands silhouetted by
the roaring blaze, then begins to speak…

“Watch the path of each burning cinder!.
See how some leap and spin!. See how
some fly straight like an arrow to the
heart of the enemy!.”

“From the dancing fire, each flitter
of flame is born from the confluence
of air and heat and sent streaking
across the night sky like a comet!.”

Cornplanter’s heart swelled with pride
as Sandal Walker told the lesson!. He
knew just then that he had chosen the
right one to follow in his footsteps!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Three is the answer!. I'll tell you more about it shortly!. (you don't mind if I call you "shortly", do you!?!)
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Its very good, I have about six books or short stories in production at present and have only discovered Poetry on Yahoo about a week or so ago!.

I have found a liking for writing of the mid nineteenth century, where the stilted language of the upper classes met the crude speech of the entrepreneurs from the working classes crude as in devoid of long words rather than the inclusion of swear words!.

If that is original free verse it's the best I have seen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

same story different author!. I would like to find lightening on a page!
You get pretty close to the fire!. Gabriel Marquez rocks!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very, very vivid!
What's he mean "spamming!?"
I can only read one book at a time or they start to blend in to one another!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The ending should be
"You"
It is indeed a sad truthWww@QuestionHome@Com

Chief Seneca is proud!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

There are 8 million tales in the naked city, how can I not read at least some of them!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

You may joke, but even your irony is beautifully stated!. Now, get serious and really write your own legend!. And why not!? Plenty of others have done so, and their work lives on for eons!. I can't believe you have decided that you no longer want to say something important!. Forget about aggravating the Conservatives and do what you do best!. They couldn't care less about you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't know why but the fire and Sandal Walker reminded me of this Grateful Dead classic, excerpts from which appear below:

Let my inspiration flow in token rhyme, suggesting rhythm,
That will not forsake you, till my tale is told and done!.

While the firelight's aglow, strange shadows from the flames will grow,
Till things we've never seen will seem familiar!.
!. !. !.

While the story teller speaks, a door within the fire creaks;
Suddenly flies open, and a girl is standing there!.

Eyes alight, with glowing hair, all that fancy paints as fair,
She takes her fan and throws it, in the lions den!.

Which of you to gain me, tell, will risk uncertain pains of hell!?
I will not forgive you if you will not take the chance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com