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Question: A poem for your reading!?
This poem describes how I find myself feeling most of the time

Have you ever felt it
that feeling so indescriable
a bitter sweetness on the tip of your tounge
joyful pain tingling inside you
anxiety and content rolled into one
wanting to kill and protect those you love
ludicrasly sane thoughts in the back of your head
knowing what to do and being confused in the same moment
hearing deaf words in a loud whispher
blindly seeing your whole life
when the feeling leaves you became relaxed
so relaxed you could sleep for weeks on end
but also imensly restless
so much that you won't be satsified till the whole world is yoursWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
8 ,very good!. You may want to check your spelling though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

About a 3!. Was it your intent for the thing to be a complete oxymoron!?
Your spelling needs work!. As does your punctuation!. Where's your quesiton mark!?
Sounds like so many others on here lately full of teenage angst!. Did some teacher somewhere make an assignment of this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i would give it a 9!.9
there's always room for more [lol]
you're good with describing your emotions
I hope you continue to write!!
best of luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would give it a 9! It was a really good poem! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

5Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I give it a -10 on spelling alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

10!. it was really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com