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Question: An Elysabeth sonnet with variations, maybe!?
At least part of her rules I adhered to!.
And still the grass needs mowing
Robin in serious mode this morning
Relentless tugging of worm resisting
Real drama in dewy grass unfolding
Rambunctious robin really regaling
Squirrely squirrel decides to sneak a peek
Surely some kernels of goodies he seeks
Spudsy spots squirrel and doggy does streak
Sadly, for Spudsy, dinner does looks bleak
Timid bee buzzes bedazzling flowers
Trying to discern nectar’s best shower
Tis hard in colored canopies bower
Taking the tempting nectar to devour
Varying vistas are my eyes viewing
Verdant vestments…the grass still needs mowing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
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And what to my morning eyes should appear!.!.!.but a dusting off of an old reindeer!
HA! Almost, almost!.!.!.!.goody!
And, you came back to the original thought, after taking us on a 'vista view'!.!.!.!.!.goody!
Gonna hafta do another one of these!.!.!.!.!.goody!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Boy of boy, I am impressed!.
Gale's Brain-Dead Sonnet
Tired, trying to take it all in
Time and time I try, having anew to begin!.
Talented people, each and everyone
True praises of you, to all, I've sung!.
This old gal's brain is so rusty and dull,
Trigee's,acrostics, over all I must mull!.
Too hard for me, I tip my bonnet
To those who can write an Elysabeth sonnet!.
The clock does tick away the time
The only thing I can do is try to rhyme!.
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I tried to do one of these a while ago and failed!. Now, I've forgotten the rules!. Can you post the rules in an edit!? Is all the alliteration required!? I'm so confused!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, what a challenge to self, nice view of the animal world,
My grass needs mowing too, too hot and rain each part of
the 24 hours!.
Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Elysabethan, alright!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com