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Question: Poem - Metal Mask!?
a poem i wrote today!.!.!.!.!.

-=Metal Mask=-

Abrasive
Coarse
Never ask
What’s behind
That metal mask!?

Unseen
Shadowed
The truth
Your blindness
My noose

Fire
Scars
Heartache
Loving you
My mistake

Distant
Lost
World unknown
My life
I don’t own

Blackened
Darkness
You wont see
The true person
The real me

Simply
Because
Never ask
What’s behind
That metal mask!?

comments!? tips!? suggestions!?
the person that gets the main meaning behind the poem gets 10 points

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow! this truly is an amazing poem!
i think i get what ur trying to say!.!.!.
ur talking about how no one is trying to look past ur outside!.!.!.
and it seems like no one cares!.!.!.
if this isn't what u were saying sorry but I think it's an amazing poem!.!.!.!.u have a real giftWww@QuestionHome@Com

cooooooooooooooolWww@QuestionHome@Com

cool! I like ur poem!I get wat u mean!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com