I need help with a poem i made?

Question: I need help with a poem i made!?

I did the poem, i just need help making it flow more!. i wanna give it to my boyfriend soon!. thank you =]

Six moons it's been since the first day of living
Hope was born
Happiness was restored
Red butterflies awakened in the winter night
The miracle of feeling once more alive
Escape from hell was within reach
The knowledge of love existing
The evolution of adherence
Caused the birth of new life
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WOW
that's really good :)
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Hey, stop apologizing! That poems is really nice!. when i date I would love to do something like this if my b/f was that kind of guy!. Im too young now, but I do like to do this stuff!.

I like it!. and i like how its not mushy gushy rhyming!.
could you read mine!? there are one 2 seperate (sp) Qs!.
I am very young and they were for school!. I got an A, but I want to know what others think!. P&S!.
Oh and they had to be specific or they would be better
Like I had to do!. Onomonapia, quatrains, couplet, metaphor, personification, ect!.

certain stuff like that!.

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Yeah, that sounds fine!. You dont need any revisions!.Www@QuestionHome@Com