Do you Uzit Si my new poem?

Question: Do you Uzit Si my new poem!?

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Destiny never flogged me
with the lash of chiseled qualities,
never made me charge the guns
to find if I would fight or run!.

I’ve flailed away at foes my own,
toppled sand castles, and
tossed king crab
from his throne!.

Damp, the pond for frogs!.!.!.Damp by God!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Your damp pond is a deep one and has a much more serious tone to it!. I can read so many things into this poem!.
It also has me wondering and guessing!. Although I like the poem as a whole, the first two lines are my favorites!. I'll be thinking about this one for a while!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

But, out of chiseled qualities!.!.!.you are a creator!.!.!.of poetry and such magnificent arts!.
Chiseled, because strength is needed for creativity!.!.!.and, hand-tossing king crabs!.
And, damp, for remorsefulness!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is not true; you are not a small frog in a big pond or a big frog in a small pond!. You are a prince, a poet, an inspiration!. We all feel this way at times!. It will pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Uzi says bullets seek endings
you sir!.!.!. dare seek understandings
Take heart, for!.!.!.!.!.
chiseled stones eventually reveal
destinies!.!.!.!.sans or sans not frogs!.

Your poem I like, mine, shoot it!Www@QuestionHome@Com