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Question: Do you Atoon Baba my new poem!?
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I will bet you !.75¢ and some pocket lint
that you cannot jump from there to here!
Right…you start there and jump here!.
Ready…“What do you mean you’re not ready!?”

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I'm with Reenie on this one!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.what the bloomin' 'eck are you on about!? I rarely read the national news!.!.!.!.should I!? Would it help!? (some-how, I doubt it)Www@QuestionHome@Com

What, you think my mind can make a jump to your mind!?
yea, I'm not ready!.
I should have guessed by the header that your mind is somewhere far, far away right now!.

entertaining though :)

Oh, a leap of faith!.!.!.In that case you better stand back!.!.!.
I took a leap with you once and I landed in a book!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

that vast inbetween is expressed in such a conventional way!.!.!. like war and love and fear and aphehension and incomprehension !. You have said a lot in a short second!. it is brilliant!. Matter of fact it is a matter of fact !.!.!.bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

*sings*

Any length you can jump I can jump farther,
I can jump any length farther than you!.

*gets yelled at and stops singing*

Great poem!. Yes, I am willing to take a leap of faith!.!.!.anywhere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

What!? Not worth it for 6 bits and pocket lint!.!.!.I'll give you a tip though!. if you jump from here to there, and change! heheWww@QuestionHome@Com

All that study of ancient mythology and languages is making your readers crazy! Still, I'll try to make the jump!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Who's on first, you must have found your funny bone today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As Quick Draw once said: "Ok, I'm ready for the poem, Babbalooie!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

Uh, you're bored today!.!.!.aren't you!.!.!.huh!.!.!.!.

Okay!.!.!.try creating a trigee that ryhmes on the inside word of the stanzas!.!.!.not on the outside words, mind you!.!.!.!.

Away we go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have all the faith in the world !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.And I've taken that leap before!.!.!.I'm ready for my close up Mr DeMille !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Im thinking you've all gone batty! I'm glad I went to work or I might have caught it too!Www@QuestionHome@Com