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Question: Trigree Acrostic Sestina; Fallen Angels, Do you like my Poem!?
Due to the limitations of Y/A I have had to post this in a single column, However, to return this to its original form;
Copy and past onto a Word document putting the Poem in two EVEN columns!. The top line will read;
“How will you glory in this place angels Repentance is not something that you should do”

(Left Hand Side)
How will you glory in this place angels
Each one of you created in splendor
And if you, could want more, then God would give
Verily I will say this now unto you
Each one of you worship without excuse for
Nothing else left here, for you now to do

More than we deserve, that He should give
I need His mercy; it endures for you to do
Good too, be a blessing from Him through you
Has He not always provided for His Angels!?
Those who forever cherish His splendor
You know what life is really for

Forever, we seek to be like you
And the love we had before
Let the light that comes from angels
Lead us to love and freely give
Encouraging us in the work to do
Not knowing how we can truly glory in your splendor

The angels that are made little higher than you
Have all the splendor and know what it is for
Entrusted are those that will give and do

(Right Hand Side)
Repentance is not something that you should do
Each one made as the Lords Angels
Blessings like the manna that fell before
Each are guilty of abuse of splendor
Lying about the glory that been placed upon you
So pray that in His Mercy, He will give

A second chance to those fallen before
Not for you to decide, who you will give
God in His entire magnificent splendor
Even telling exactly what to do
Love to live a life like His true angels
So why did you not pray like how He taught you

Underneath the beauty of all that Splendor
Now waits in the darkness prepared for you
Shine forth no more; let it be given to those that do
Each day without excuse, like before
Each one an account they will give
Now that you are fallen angels

Each are angels in true splendor
Nothing can stop them giving gifts to you
Dangerous work for us that’s what they doWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You're a poetic genius!. You need to get serious about publishing your own book!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, your poem is bright and full of light
Like a tarnished jewel of antiquity
A cushion pillow to catch the falling gems
The noise of peace and love is heard among the written words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good poem!. Very creative on your part!. Thanks for the helpful instructions!. Almost too much work for you and me!. Enjoyed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great poem, congratulations!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing!. I am going to copy and paste it, so that I can read it properly!.
You have done a wonderful job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have 2 comments:
HOLY COW!!!!!!
~and~
BEAUTIFUL!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good, Dr Frankenstein!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

bravo!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing, what else can I say!. Ask Gideon indeed!. Great Moniker!. How the hell do you do this stuff!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!.!.!.!.!.this is really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Takes a rather brilliant person to write a poem like this!. And it is true not all of the angels are good anymore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com