Please help, Poem rewording?

Question: Please help, Poem rewording!?

Ok I wrote this poem and already asked for some opinions but I don't qiuet know how to change the last three lines so they still have the same feel but fit into the ryhme scheme!. please help!.
A Beautiful Rose
I lay there shattered and broken
All from the words you haven't spoken
All seems to be black
And time can only move back
The garden; it mourns
But you forgot one simple thing
Even such precious roses, have prickling thornsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The garden it mourns,
But you forgot,
Even such precious roses,
have prickling thorns!.

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The garden; it mourns
Even such precious roses, have prickling thorns
But you forgot one simple thing
The ravishing beauty that it will bring

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Keep it the way it is!.!. It's beautiful!.
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