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Free from the past, eternity wakes!. Hearts dance new rhapsodies; the arrival of the dawn signals a liberation from my trials and sorrows!. Hope in my soul, fire in my heart, I sing again!. Author's Note: The complete unlucky is a seven line poem with syllables in the order of 1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11, 13!. It can be about anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Something tells me that these stories of mornings are more then they would appear to most!.!.!. there is something in your words that makes me think more is going on behind this poets quill then simple art!.!.!. inspiration based on experience has stricken the heart of Eva, if I am not mistaken!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "Awakened" seems almost to be about an epiphany, and it is completely lovely!. "Hearts dance new rhapsodies" speaks of a new or awakened love and this love brings you hope and passion!. You have given your devoted audience the opportunity to share this experience!. Just beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love this poem!. I certainly fit me today !.!.!. oh what a beautiful day!.!.!. captured in your lovely poem! This morning I had a wake-up call, that was okay -- but I had to force myself to remember what I'd been dreaming -- it was about MCAT tests and the only class I could take was spelling at 5:00 AM -- and I kept telling them I'd never make it!. ToriWww@QuestionHome@Com my rooster reminds me of many things in the morning!. but i think this is why that ol boy crows tho, really!.!. hey thanks for explaining the complete unlucky too!. now i know!Www@QuestionHome@Com Oy! If only! The two things each day That I find so hard to do To wake up all fresh in the morning And then, at night, to return to sweet slumber!. A dream Evadne-inspired, no wonder I'm so tired!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sings of refreshing, reawaking, new birth, Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com Somewhat, but not as spectacularly as you describe!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice form and I really like the message of the poem; especially the last line!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This rings true for the title given!. Interesting twist with the two syllable jump between lines!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely poem and a fun new form to play with! Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com |