Is this a good start to a poem?

Question: Is this a good start to a poem!?

Its about werewolves!.

A witches curse once chanted
to fixate eyes on a full moon
surely its horror is granted
fur backed, all fours by noon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Oh, you have a great imagination for fantasy! Take this someplace!.

Macbeth by Shakespeare begins with
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 1 WITCH!. Thrice the brinded cat hath mew'd!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 2 WITCH!. Thrice and once, the hedge-pig whin'd!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 3 WITCH!. Harpier cries:—'tis time! 'tis time!
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 1 WITCH!. Round about the caldron go;
!.!.!.!. further in the play are the most famous lines, same scene
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.ALL!. Double, double toil and trouble;
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Fire burn, and caldron bubble!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. 2 WITCH!. Cool it with a baboon's blood,
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. Then the charm is firm and good!.

Yours is charismatic -- and you could go forward with a novel or short story beginning with these words;

A witches curse once chanted
to fixate eyes on a full moon
surely its horror is granted
fur backed, all fours by noon!.

Try it!.!.!.!. talent is a rare and precious gift!.

ToriWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love the way you word your poetry!. you can take something as simple as a child's tale, and turn it into some thing memorizing!. I love this start, I look forward to the rest!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, it rhymes and all, but sounds like the opening of a cheesy Simpson's Halloween special!. (No disrespect to the Simpson's - just your poem)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The meter is choppy!. Recount your syllables!. Consider anapestic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, very mystical!.
you can add on by:

The night sky is slowly darkning
soon comes the crack of dawn
cats black witches green skined
sit on thy toadstool,Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this is a great start, it's kinda creepy and gives off a scary vibe!. :D I love it~
Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
If you can, put up more!. It's got a guranteed Hallow's Eve air about it!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

no it sucksWww@QuestionHome@Com