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Question: Rate my poem 1-10 comments too!. (I'm 13 years of age)!?
Although the pain continues,
I continue to be strong!.
Although my friend are leaving,
I stay where I belong!.
My parents think I’m crazy!.
My peers think so too!.
They don’t know how hard it is!.
They haven’t got a clue!.
They don’t see the madness,
Or my life’s disarray!.
They don’t see what I go through
each and every day!.
Whether I be wrong,
Or whether I be right!.
I hope my friends forgive me,
So we can reunite!.
this is a part two to my last poem!.!.!.to read it check "my questions" on my profile!.!.!.!.it is under rate my poem 1-10Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice!.!.!.I'd say a 9 if it's a true reflection of your inner self!. To me, any art form is wonderful if it speaks of the person who created it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
your meter is good but the poem itself seems cliche to me
you said it was part 2 and I haven't read part 1 so maybe it wouldn't be so cliche if I read the other part but intill then you get a 6 out of 10 from meWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like it! Let me go check the beginning at profile!.
can u look at mine!? I am a year younger and mine are at my profile!. there are a few!. under 2 qs!. youll see them
thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is very good, I'd give it a 7 or an 8!.!.!. just be careful in line three, it should be "friends", not "friend"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'd give you 8!.5 to 9 out of 10!. It's pretty nice!. However, it seem like that you've never tell your friends/family your problems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Like 10!. but weighted for a 13 year old 16 out of 10Www@QuestionHome@Com