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Question: What's your opinion on this!?
Do you like my poem!? HONESTLY!?
plz rate it (1-10) nd yes i am a girl!.
She entered under the guise of night
Unlooked for, unseen, amazing,
My being was dark, no light
Life till then, unchanging
Never did my eyes see
Misunderstood, unclear, yet gleaming
That she was there, next to me
In my room, in my mind; breathing
With a question I answered false
With a touch of her hair did spark
Our lives entwined suddenly
Bringing light to a place that was dark
Best are things unexpected
And doing what your heart has trusted!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think itz beautiful dear!. 10's across the board :]Www@QuestionHome@Com
It Ok imagining hings, but where you have not exerienced something yet your readers have you are inevitably in difficulty!.suggested extra verses, you may seek to absorb their meaning!.
She lay upon the bed there
her own passion quenched
She felt as if her innards
from her had been wrenced
She thiought of all the poems
of passions sweet beauty
But that they never told her
The first times agony!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it!. its a bit of the older style where poems still have rhyming words!. but thats the style of poetry i love!. but i like how the story / idea unfolds and i like that catchy 'lightbulb' ending!. hope this helps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Umm!.!.!.it really is good actually!.!.!.!.8!.!.!.!.!.!.but!.!.!.!.!.!.if this isn't lesbian then you are really good at faking it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good 10+!. it`s beautifully ^^ !.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's pretty good but not all poems have to rhyme!. If you don't worry about that as much, it'll be much easier!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
its nice!.you're a young poetry!.if its real by you,i give you 8Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your first sexual experience!?
I give it an 8!.Www@QuestionHome@Com