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Question: So, was it better then with none or now with too much!?
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when I was thirteen
for country and queen
I charged through the valley with Kipling
beated and splayed
alongside Din laid
this frail and unhardy stripling

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I prefer the depth of the other poem; but this is no small chllenge to put as much power in a short poem -- and you have mastered it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it was good then and it is good now as well!. you had no vocabulary then!.!.u have a lot now!. then, expressing youself was tougher!.!.the world was still a maze but now things have straightened up and u can express youself better!. u can define a lot of things!.!.i guess that should be better!. some things of course have to be left unexplained!.

it was good then with all the wonder and few words and it is still good with a bit less wonder and more words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In this poem it seems that later is hard to deal with!.
Before all was well!.
When it comes to real life, I always find myself thristy for the childhood awe I once had!. It was better back then, for me at least!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Better Now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com