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when I was nine
diminutive swine
endured lupine huff-puffing
straw and wood houses
blown down by wolf louses
fly feathers and other couch stuffing
now fifty two
down chimney and flue
no elves, no fairies, no nothing
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when I was nine diminutive swine endured lupine huff-puffing straw and wood houses blown down by wolf louses fly feathers and other couch stuffing now fifty two down chimney and flue no elves, no fairies, no nothing *****Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: These are so whimsical and appealing!. You have been working so hard, they are probably all around you and you don't see them!. It's good to know your heart is open to them!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com what are you waiting for!? for the poems or for the fairies and elves of a different world!? if you were waiting for the poems!.!.then they are here already!.!.you've done a good work with the one u've put down there for i think they are two parts of the same poem!. it seems from your poems that you think that paradise is already over!.!.but i think its still heaven around you because heaven is now and this where you are standing!. whatever you are waiting for is already there!.!.u just need to see it and not wait!. heaven is simply a realisation of reality!.Www@QuestionHome@Com They're coming, don't worry!. These are nice and take me back when my imagination was my best friend!. It's sad that we lose our ability to imagine and play like we did when we were children!. The second sounds like a song!. You could easily put it to music!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Are we ever--------content with what is, both of these at there times ring true, yet I cotton to the the second one, my mind escapes!. Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com These are both soooo good! Thomas Wolfe was wrong!.!.!.and he was right!. You CAN go back again, but everything has changed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com We all grow up and also our imagination!.Www@QuestionHome@Com They all come when you turn 57! Trust me on that! A nice write with humor and much meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I don't know which one you really meant, but both are wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com If you build it, they will come!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Be patient!. They will come !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |