This one has lumps also. Someday, as foretold by the Seneca Chief . . . ?

Question: This one has lumps also!. Someday, as foretold by the Seneca Chief !. !. !. !?

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The prairie echoes !. !. !. !. dark clouds belching out
the words of !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. man hearing
lost languages that !. !. !. !. dead corn planter foretelling,
we cannot relearn !. !. !. !. !. by a magpie’s mimicking

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Very nice!. I was away working in my garden for the past week and came back to all these trigees!. I thought them interesting so I decided to look up the form and give it a go!. Silly me did not realize that it is another form concocted by you!. You did good!. They are fun and a bit challenging which is always a joy!. Thanks for the new form!.

I gave it a go!.!.!.check it out!.
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I find the left part to be tightly knit and intensely moving!. The right part is good also, somewhat reminiscent of William Blake!. Unfortunately, when scrunched together, much is lost and nothing gained!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

how about
'dead cornplants foretell'
instead!.

the lost language of a stare will never be forgotten!.
but i like that side of the poem too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thankfully, not all languages are lost !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dark clouds belching!.!.!.!.EXCELLENT!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, especially the first side!.Www@QuestionHome@Com