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Question: The lumpy ones are not as good, no!?
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A schedule !. !. !. !. !. for the day I die
of emotions !. !. !. !. !. I can write,
should be kept !. !. !. clearly and
in pencil !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. unfixed

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Don't know what I'd do w/o my eraser!.

This is clever!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You seem to be establishing a pattern: the first part is intensely powerfully and tautly written; the second is a shade more relaxed in style, and has a hint of ambiguity; the union is considerably weaker!. But this whole trigee idea is worth exploring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This, surely, is not a lumpy one!?

That's how I like them: to the point!. They should be minimalistic and not verbose!.

(From The Tricky Art of Trigee, by T!. D!. Euwaite, 2008)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

With pencil, you can always erase!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, like gravy, sometimes you get lumps, but it still tastes good!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lumpy!? No!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Wonderful!?!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Yes!


nfd ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

sometimes i enjoy how youll make the question
so things posts!. haha!
because im a pencil freak
i like this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lumpy!? What did I miss!?Www@QuestionHome@Com