These tricky ones work better on paper, don't you think?

Question: These tricky ones work better on paper, don't you think!?

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When all was wrecked, !. !. !. ruined, Art and
Architecture became !. !. !. !. !. temporary lodging for
monotonous, flat-faced !. !. !. bent and twisted souls in
cities turned gray !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. emotionless tones kept droning

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Amazing, simply amazing!
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I guess that I am in the small minority of those who are willing to say this form is hardly worth the effort!. Nevertheless, this one works quite well!. There is a harmony of both meaning and sound here!. I've read almost all that you have presented, and have not been impressed by most of them!. What does impress me is your willingness to explore the possibilities of something new!. And so, in spite of your many flaws, shortcomings, weaknesses, sins and peccadildos, you have won my admiration, respect and affection!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you talking about the poem or about architecture!?

Architecture, nowadays, often works better on paper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your style was quite unique , like-able actually, I liked the ------representing the hesitation to linger, yes quite nice, thanks for sharing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I much prefer pen to paper over fingers to keyboard!.!.!.It's more romantic somehow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its apocalyptic paper!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Change is not always for the best!. Paper and pencil yes
soul contact!. Kudos on this tricky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one, or two, or three!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Much meaning here, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

So much meaning in these things you write my friend!

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