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Question: Is it bad when your town is always the star of the Weather Channel!?
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Crack open !. !. !. !. The clouds bringing
another !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. torrent rushing down the
bottleneck !. !. !. !. !. !. pass and searching
for me !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. !. with flood waters!.

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Two distinct poems and a third!.!.!.sort of like a Haiku here!.!.!.in that two are associated, and one is having fun with a bottleneck!.
Yeah, I'd say that's bad when it's always on the news!. OUCH!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ya, it makes me want to crack open bottlenecks too, you know,
watching all that water!. hahaha!

!.!.like how the flood waters are searching!.!.
nice words for that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hahaha! Wisconsin can offer some competition there! 9 inches of rain this weekend!!
(*Scratching head trying to figure out what to do with the tree limb in the back yard!.!.!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its not bad, but i would not want to live where the weather was always yucky! i would want sun some of the time! im sorry pal!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The sun will come out tomorrow,
Come what may
Tomorrow Tomorrow Tomorrow

Trying to cheer you up!! yeah bad news when your town is the star of the weather channel!!!

Like your unique poem !Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would worry cuz it will bring your property values downWww@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, this one is great!. Sounds like you are writing about my town!. We must both be experiencing stormy weather today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My tree came crashing down last night!. I believe, that deserves a star!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah, it is, but the trigee ain't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, I would say it is!

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