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Question: Semper attempting a Trigee!? Can he do it!?
A kiss in the dark!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A smile in the sun
The song of a lark!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A day just for fun
A dive into love!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A swim within reach
Wings of a dove!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Or footprints on a beachWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Yeah, he can do it, he done it, and done it quite well, and made it rhyme too!. Awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is Semper mastering theTrigee with grace and beauty and joy!. I love the contrasts within your poem!. It is just enchanting!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes indeed! I've been waiting for this!! It is beautiful, sensual, and visual!. "A dive into love,"--I'm breathless!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You never cease to amaze me!.!.!.absolutely stunning!. Koye, this might be my favorite work of yours!. Keep em coming!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Absolutely marvelous! Gives an immediate sense of comfort and security!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yes,Semper can!.!.!.i think he can, i think he canWww@QuestionHome@Com
Of course he can, he is a Marine and they can do anything!!! Bravo, bravo!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This one has the smoothest flow so far!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's awesome I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
sounds like 'round the clock joy, Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is perfect! I think this might be my favorite Trigee so far, although all have been great!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You done well! Now go and (re) dive into love! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
OH WOW!.!.!.that is really good!.!.!.
>YES< he can do it!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com