Trigee attempt...is it okay?

Question: Trigee attempt!.!.!.is it okay!?

The night is long!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Day has begun
Let soul stay strong!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Now comes the sun
Withstand the hour!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.When shadows creep-
And infinite power!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Wakes childhood sleep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Amy, it's lovely!. One of the best so far!. This looks like so much fun!. I've got to try one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The fact that you have written such an exquisite trigee and kept the rhyme true throughout and the flow seemless only speaks even louder to your great talent as a poet!. Thank you so much for this contribution, and welcome to the fold of those who have attempted trigee!. Beautiful beyond words, as ever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do not know the rules on this sort of thing but the poem is one of the most beautiful I have seen of late!.!.!. I am not simply being kind! I do not know what I would do without do without your poetry!.!.!. it stimulates my artistic and poetic mind-space!.!.!. And I am going to assume you meant Day not da!.!.!. unless you tell me otherwise!.!.!.

Blessed Be, SirenWww@QuestionHome@Com

this is beautiful! love the last line especially
help me with mine!? (not as good as urs but i bet im younger lol)
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not use to seeing poetry like this, but I like it very much(the poem)!. !. !.its really different to me and reads in a new way, so very cool! I loved it=) 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I haven't seen this before!. Very nice!. Interesting thoughts and imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very nice!. I love how everyone is gravitating to this form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely Trigee!. I'm glad to see you've joined the Trigee-ers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, especially liked you last line!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Serene, lovely words that go round and 'round!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You guys are wonderful with these trigees!. I may throw my hat in the ring!.Www@QuestionHome@Com