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Question: Something different; could you please comment & make any title suggestions!?
orb!.!.!.!.
darkness!.!.!.!.!.
everlasting!.!.!.!.
forever!.!.!.!.!.
time!.!.!.!.
endless!.!.!.!.

light!.!.!.!.!.
ice !.!.!.!.
cold!.!.!.!.
black!.!.!.!.
empty!.!.!.!.!.!.
lonely!.!.!.!.!.
soundless!.!.!.!.!.
nothing!.!.!.!.!.

life!.!.!.!.!.
meaning!.!.!.!.
void !.!.!.!.
widening!.!.!.!.!.
clear!.!.!.
thoughts!.!.!.!.


true!.!.!.
insight

Geoffrey Brett ? 08/06/08Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love it, I myself and the way that I think, if I wrote it I would call it AWAKENING!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

jimi's AWAKENING is a very good answer!.

I'm glad to see you are putting the copyright on your poetry now! Good for you!.

Good work!. That's about how I feel right now after yesterday's celebration!.
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Some different meanings come to mind from the circle of life that without life has no meaning to nothingness versus life!. Interesting layout!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

seems like you had a moment like mine!?


my soul speaks!?
quite in thought!?
ramblings of a mad man (mad=man attains divinity)
silently speaking!?

swallowed the dictionary (lol)Www@QuestionHome@Com

enjoyed!. i like the title PORTAL!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh my! The creation of the Universe in a poem! Congratulations! As for a title: Creation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How about:
Inner Light!.!.!.!.the struggleWww@QuestionHome@Com

"CRIES TO HEAVEN" not meant in a religious sense!.Www@QuestionHome@Com