Mini Alliteration Story?

Question: Mini Alliteration Story!?

I need help improving and making the mini story better and longer!. not too long jsut maybe 2-3 more line plz and ty:)

Sally Samson sprinted past the sundry students!.Sally scampered past the finsih line to shake hands with Simon and Silvia Suzuki after sprinting past the sundry students in the Sprinting race!. Sally secured the significant scholarship given to her by the Sudbury Science University!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I don't think that sundry is an appropriate word!.

Sally Samson sprinted Saturday!. She soared successfully surprising Simon Suzuki!. Students say Simon scampered somewhere sorrowfully!. Sally sprinted so swiftly she secured a significant scholarship to Sudbury Science school!. Sally was secretly saddened, she sought Simon's smile someday!.

I kind of rewrote the whole thing!.!.!.sorry!.!.!.but maybe it'll give you some good ideas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its funny, i once wrote an alliteration poem for a grade and it was like 500 words!. lol!. plz read my poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com