Everyone is doin' some happnin' Trigees. Is this one good?

Question: Everyone is doin' some happnin' Trigees!. Is this one good!?

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I breath you in !. !. !. !. with a sigh
I hold you in !. !. !. !. !. a part of me
I keep you in !. !. !. !. !. !. disguises
I am blinded !. !. !. !. !. !. !. with lies

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Wow!. This one really works well!.

Note here you never commented on MY Trigee!. I was depressed all day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you, it is nice to read a trigee just before going to sleep!.!.!. I like this one very much!.
I have been blinded with lies myself quite a few times!.
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i really like this!.
all 3 poems perfect!.

you can even play with it!.!.

Reenie try changing the last line
and play it to-(just a thought)
'i am whole!.!.!.!.!.!.!.with your love'

this trigee idea has some room to be interactive
with it too i think!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the Trigee, but I hate the last line!.!.!.
Hugs sent your way and "new-form"
to stay!.!.!. Gotta shut down it's strorming again
See ya in the morn!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely breathtaking trigee and message!. You and Semper can fight over the head table now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lies have blindsided all of us at one time or another, but never has it been expressed like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with your I's and I give you an aye that's a good one! Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nah! IT'S GREAT!!!! Euwaite and see, dude!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice ending, I wasn't expecting that!. Great Trigee!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you joining our "anon Ttigees meetings"

Yes, Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one is great !!! As I've enjoyed them All !.!.!.!.!.Thank You

This one has a lot of truth in it!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A LOT OF TRUTH!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com