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Question: Perhaps a trigree tripled!?
Night times hold magic

Nightime loving!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.play me a song!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.satin dancing
warming embrace!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.softly moving!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.drum beats primal
passion brewing!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.loving's coming!.!.!.!.!.!.!.as fire flames
sunrise can wait!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.bodie's entwining!.!.!.!.!.!.!.nighttime loving!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The Triple Trigee!.!.!.!.skies save me! This is excellent, a must see for TD!. Great poems too, very scintillating and erotic!.!.!.makes me happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is stunning!. I love it -- I love the multiplicity of meanings and linking with your work!. Wonderful play with the words!.
I love it!.!.!. Took me into a lite creative crafting with your masterpiece -- forgive me!.
T!.

Try this: Takes you back to the first!.!.!.
and other formats -- sheer genius!!

Nightime loving!.!.!.!.
softly moving
as fire flames
sunrise can wait

play me a song
drum beats primal
passion brewing
bodies entwining

satin dancing
warming embrace
lovings coming
nighttime loving

Nightime loving
softly moving
passion brewing!.
sunrise can wait!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Show-off! :)

By George, he's got it! great work!.!.!.!.I think I shall take a back seat on these, I'm still working on that damn Sestina!.

(bodies entwining)!.!.!.you don't need the possessive here!.
(unless you mean - the entwining which belongs to the bodies!.!.!.in which case it would be bodies' entwining)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Know---you---now
I----plead---truce!
Three--no-----way
no----way---three!


LoL! my brain is taxed! I was in thought you'd come up with a winner long before this!. These flames are burning up the screen! "Three" Wow! Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am speechless, probably for the first time in my life!. Brilliant! (For "bodie's," read "bodies")!.

Addition: After this, I may never write again!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Something is not quite right!. I am wondering could you write a Trigee-Rondo-Retourne with an Etheree twist next time please !? ;-) lol beautiful and triply skilful!

Trigee-nomotry rocks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is brilliant! I haven't even tried the double yet and you've already mastered a triple!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unorthodox skill my friend! Kudos!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unothdoxically, fantastical!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoa, goose bumps!. excited!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's hot!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! This is great!
Did you get TD's permission to triple!?
I'm sure he will love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

We'll have it like Rubik's Cube before long!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Super!. I shall catch my breath now !.!.!. 3x !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com