A Classic start to a poem ...Is it too short?

Question: A Classic start to a poem !.!.!.Is it too short!?

!.!.The boy stood on the burning deck
to the spot he had been glued
by happy slappers flippin heck
then posted on youtubeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Someone came along with water
And said we really, really oughta
Unglue the lad, put out the flame
This is a very dangerous game
The youtube watchers were dismayed
To see the vision slowly fade
So the happy slappers came right back
And glued him to the chimney stack
Re-lit the fire, then all were happy
Except the poor beleaguered chappie!.

Few answers!.Pity!. They are missing a gem here from the two of us!Www@QuestionHome@Com

well it rhymesWww@QuestionHome@Com