Position:Home>Poetry> Is this a good poem for my age im 12????

its pretty short well i think im in grade six and love poetry!

I hear the knocking in my head
As I lay out stradled on my bed
I listen to the rain
And feel this scorching pain
The knocking is from me
The better side I don't want to see
So I lay there wondering why
I can't let the normal me in, as I cry
The cold tears
Add to the painful fears
I try to catch my breath
As I lay waiting as for death
I don't want to live like this
So I phone to hear your voice because it's you I miss
I hear your velvet voice
And I let myself in making a choice
I sob sofly on the phone
Closing my eyes listening to your comforting tone
I let my old self drown
And I smile out of my frown
And let the normal me in
And wipe the tears away that rolled down my chin
You are alway there for me
And you opened my normal self in with your magic key
So now your holding me in your arm
protecting me from evil harm
And now your looking me in the eyes to say
"I loved you every signal day"Www@QuestionHome@Com

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