This a good poem?

Question: This a good poem!?

im lookin through the eyes
trying to see if i cna get past these lies

every time i try a person falls and dies

i cant seem to get this away it just seems i have to cry it away!.

you never tell hte truth it just seems to be one of your sweet tooths!.

lives are tuppose to be at youth ending peoples lives one day at a timeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's good, make sure you don't make any typos next time, and The last two lines don't make sense to me, but its a poem!.!.!.it doesn't have to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

grrrreaat! wooo weeeaoor wooo wee ang wooo weeeaooorWww@QuestionHome@Com