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Question: Spanish question!.!. I need help with this poem! In spanish!?
Si Bien la Ense?anza no se Puede Tener Su Pastel y Comérselo También!

Los ni?os están realmente emocionados
Pero el maestro en la escuela está ingresado
Los profesores obtenein las vacaciones de verano
Pero los maestros reciben un bajo sueldo estimado

Maestros ven caras sonrientes todos los días
Pero luego ven compa?eros de trabajo son a las bestias!.
Los maestros tienen ventajas
Pero también tienen desventajas!.

Okay so my spanish teacher wanted me to use a different words other then ingresado, estimado and bestias!.
I wrote the poem in AA, BB format and she wanted the pair of A's to have the same amount of syllables (no more than 12) and the last word to rhyme!. The same with the B's!. This is what I have so far and I need help! Can someone please help me!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You've done really well!. I speak a little Spanish so I can understand some of this, but I don't know enough to make any suggestions!. However, I can suggest that you post this question and poem in the Spanish section of Y!A!. I'll bet you get a great deal of help there!. Just scroll down to the bottom of this page and select "en espanol"

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