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Question: Do you like my poem!? What is a good name for it!?
I want you to be superman
I'll be your Lois Lane
You can be spider man
If I am Mary Jane
I want you to be Mario
To my Princess Peach
Be my only shining knight
The only one I beseech
I will be your Zelda
If you'll be my link
Be with me on the Titanic
When we begin to sink
I want to be Maiden Marianne
To your Robin Hood
We will become famous
Just like every couple should
I will be Wilma Flinstone
As long as you are Fred
We can live in a rock house
Like the TV always said
I can be Minnie mouse
If you'll agree to be Mickey
We can live in Disney land
As long as you're not picky
I will be Olive
If you will be Popeye
And we will be together
Until it's time to say goodbyeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'm not usually a fan of rhyming in poems but
WHOA!.
THAT ROCKED!
really really really good! the rhyming was a tiny bit forced in places but the end product really make up for that!.
Great job - it could easily be published!.
Aimee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wonderful poem
all the people in this are heroes
like superman and Lois Lane!.
Popeye and Olive
Heroes protect and guard
keeping their mate safe
promising to stay together until
the end or to say good bye!.
Heroes will not let harm come to their sidekicks!.
One person says they will be one part if the other person
will be the other person
like Mickey Mouse and Minnie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's really pretty, great verse!. I've heard a lot of poems that rhyme Mary jane and Lois Lane so it's pretty cliché!. I'd call it "Damsel in Distress" or "I need a hero" "save Me!." Thank you that was nice to read, not exactly deep visual poetry or anything though!.
Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com
the last stanza is kinda screwed up!.!.!.maybe add a few words cause it just doesnt flow!. but otherwise i thought this was one of the cutest love poems i have ever read!. its one of those poems that makes you smile because its so!.!.!.!.adorable! haha!. good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I LOVE It!.
This is the best love poem I have ever heard!. Far better than the average!. I am taking note of this cause I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com