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Question: Stupid poem I wrote in a few seconds!!?
Purpose by Kavita Pirmal
Purpose!.
Everything has one!.
That pencil,
it has a purpose!.
My shoes,
it has a purpose!.
But I wonder!.!.!.
What is my purpose!.
I’ve searched my entire life,
but not a single soul knows!.
Why do I exist!?
Why am I here!?
Everyone, everything has a purpose,
but what is mine!?
I must keep on searching,
for there must be a purpose for my existence,
if not,
why am I here!?
Please note that most of my poems are inspired by Naruto!. I am not gonna die of beat you up if you don't like it!.!.!.!.even though you probably might wish I would die!.!.!.but that's not gonna happen!. :P! Anyways, what do you think!? *drumrolls*Www@QuestionHome@Com
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That's a good poem! And that reminds me of Gaara, Sasuke, and Naruto a bit!. Oh, yeah, and I have another user in a different account, so it's Titiko Chikage, ok!? I'm Naito no Shadoanei, by the way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
decent poem!. but a few things i would like to say!. first off, i think it is a very common mistake that people make that they have to 'find' their purpose for existence!. I think you have to make your own purpose, or choose your purpose!. i dont think that anyone is really born with a purpose that they have to go through life trying to find!. i think that you go through life, experience things, and choose your purpose!. Your shoe and pencil have a purpose because you chose to designate them a purpose!. you must do the same with your own life!. a pretty decent poem other than that i guess!. oh and naruto sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I understad it!.Good poem!
Sometimes i wonder that too,but then i
remember that im here to do God's will!. To belive and love and trust and have faith in him and live a good life!. lol
Dont think that im some religious freak,i grew up as a Christian and realized its not bad at all!. God really helps me with sucess like for example in my sports,basketball,volleyball,and track!. He helped me be really good and get trophies and all that!. =]
Peace out yo
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i don't mean to be the spoil sport but i do not love it!.!.!.it is a "ok"/decent poem but in my personal opinion i find it quite bland!.!.!.sorry!.!.!.maybe if i watched naruto, i would understand where you are coming from when you say it is your inspiration but i don't so i guess i cannot quite grasp the poem as well as those who watch naruto!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice poem!.Gaara most likely inspired you , but naruto himself also might have!.Anyway, nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's cool!. I've never heard a poem like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I understand it, I do not wish you harm, you understand the eternal question!.!.!.it's not a "stupid poem", but it fails to offer any new insights to a question posed thousands of times in poetry: what is my/our purpose/reason for existing!?
You know the question, now try to offer us "your" insight!.!.!.even if it is another question!. We all have our ideas of why we are here, and our version of the question!.!.!.what is "yours"!? and I don't mean, "why am I here!?" that's a ubiquitous question!.!.!.I mean "your" version!.!.!."your" vision!.
So, your poem asks the right question, but not in a new or fresh way!. Regardless of grammatical errors (e!.g!. it should be "my shoes, they have a purpose"), the poem needs to provide fresh perspective, otherwise it's just another voice in an overloaded choir!. You have the guts to write poetry, so try addressing the issue again!.!.!.perhaps not directly!.!.!.just try something fresh!.
!.!.!.and keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com