What do you think of this? My new poem?

Question: What do you think of this!? My new poem!?

Your gaze invades my privacy
Like a search warrant gone wild
Staring makes me uncomfortable
To say the least
Like there's broccoli stuck in my teeth
How unattractive is that!?
Well that's how I feel when you stare!.
Anyway
I'm married
So nothing's happening
No need for excuses or Vegas
I'm staying faithful to her
And to God!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I appreciate the message and the sentiment that you've captured here, it reflects a dying breed!.

Vow
To stay true
To your love for life
Don't give in to temptation
Prayer

TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

You can't blame the lady for being attracted to you!. You don't have to go to Vegas (stuff gets out of there despite the commercial), but have some pity on the lady and take the stares as a compliment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done!. I've experienced that invasion of space and privacy, and it is eerie and devilishly alluring!.

Great poem -- universality is what makes a poem last!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

go into greater detail about the happieness of your marriage!. and make it clear that your belief has a part of it!.
keep it real and relax<3
Jay^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think we've all been in the situation you've depicted and you gave a pretty good out!.!.!.!.!.!.I enjoyed it!.!.!.!.and your wife would and should be proud!. I enjoyed it!!! Another winner by you!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

A story from the mind, interesting and thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it, a very good poem, and good morals to go by!. Keep up the great work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's not brocolli, it's spinach and I love your poem! The true meaning of Semper Fidelis simply stated!.
(Now go floss!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!! She must be a very special lady indeed!!

God bless you richlyWww@QuestionHome@Com

All i gotta say is !.!. its to the point!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow! good for you!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

shows heartWww@QuestionHome@Com