A New Day.........?

Question: A New Day!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?

The sun slowly rises
only to fade away
then goes into the night
with a cool midnight spray
we sleep sound in our beds
with troubles far away
only to be awakened
with the begining of a new day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Beautiful! I like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a really good poem, but the last line has a few too many syllables in it!.

Try: 'with the start of a new day'!.

Hope I didn't offend, it really is good!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful Nikki!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds good!.
make sure it all has good ryhming tho
let it roll!.!.!.!.
keep it all up<3
Jay^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

deepWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, its got a good flow to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com