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Question: Help i wrote a love poem!?
Swing low Swing high (Ole' i hope my heart dont break)

I Left my heart in a swinging chair
Its sitting calmly just swinging there
there's no savior for its misery
my heart is swinging just for me
where it touch the cloud it catches the moon
whitch tells my heart the storm will be over soon
when it swings down my heart starts to hurt
so my heart stays away from dirt
the swinging chair sometimes breaks
but my heart stays in place
the swinging chair was unwanted unclaime
but my heart still loved it the same
but yesterday i missed my heart to pieces
so i went to the chair which swung my heart to pieces-Www@QuestionHome@Com


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That's one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever heard! I bet if you correct spelling mistakes and keep on writing everyone will like your poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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