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Question: My poem!.!.!.[for soldiers]!.!.!.what do you guys think!?
Intro: Friends and family gather round,
A story must be told
You’ve heard it time and time before
Somehow, it can’t grow old!.!.!.

When the day was done
And the nite was born
The stars a’ twinkling in the sky
She looked up at him,
the tears formed in her eyes
She said ’you know I’ll really miss you’
She said ’I wish you wouldn’t go’
She said ’I’m sorry that your leaving,
And you know I love you so!.’

They paused and turned to gaze

He said ’but I never told you’’
there’s something you should know’
He said ’you know I really love you’’
but now before I go’
I want you to promise
That you’ll raise our kids up strong
Even when you miss me,
long after I am gone
I want you to promise
That you’ll just move on -
Baby, just move on!.
Please just move on!.
I know its really hard for you
Its harder yet for me
But when I walk away from here
Please just let it be
My pride in my home country
Will live strong till I die
Its something that I’ve got to do
Baby, please don’t cry
Morning light is dawning
Now kiss me once goodbye
Perhaps I’ll see you soon sometimes
And if by chance I die
Know I’ll always love you
But you should live your life
Give the kids a hug from me
Now before I say goodbye
Tell Grandma not to worry
This is my chosen life
And now I’m walking out this door
You kiss me once again
And you say "you know I’ll really miss you"
You say ’I wish you wouldn’t go’
You say ’I’m sorry that your leaving’
And you know I love you so
I say ’you know I really love you’
Now baby please don’t cry
This is my way of saying,
My final goodbye
!.!.!.My final goodbye
!.!.!.!.my final goodbyeWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What an exquisite retelling of something that seems to go on to neverending!. I LOVE IT!!! This trandescends!.

thank you so much for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats good!.
nice job
must of taken a long time to writeWww@QuestionHome@Com